All Comments on 'The Mechanic'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Awful turgid prose.

What dreadful pretentious tosh . So bad it iseems almost funny. .037d6

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Fantasy Not

Real talent at writing here, many hours invested, doubtful plot, but.. 10" soft? A hairy woman with no morals successful company CEO. Shemale. Anal. Multiple partner couplings. Sorry no score, voting at end of series perhaps. Good luck otherwise

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Brilliant until you introduced a sheemale into the story, distroyed the story for me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Exciting!

I enjoyed this story and liked the flow and the characters. You touched on and took my imagination into some of my most intensely erratic areas....mother son incest, anal sex , hairy women and shemales!

Great story and I can't wait for the next part!!

ekim22ekim22about 6 years ago
Well...that was different

You obviously like to write, hence the amount of detail you put into your stories. Almost too much detail, it got hard to read.

But I gotta admit....I quit reading at the "Lush black underarm hair".

Gross. Clearly you like what you like and who am I to say otherwise but this one wasn't for me :)

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