by fgmntfmgnshn
and no distracting typos.
the Eagle gives it 4* and two talons up.
This story was GREAT!!!! I love the way you slowly build to all three coming together at the end. I would love to read more about the three. I hope you plan on making this a series. Keep up the good no make that Great work up.
Great because it reads like a fresh idea. Those are few and far between. 5* for me, for that.
Your foreshadowing and intricate development made a believable conclusion, well done. If only it were so...