All Comments on 'The Mediator'

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larry74403larry74403about 11 years ago
Fan-fucking-tastic

This is a great story. Keep up the great work.

blackwatereagleblackwatereagleabout 11 years ago
very nice story

and no distracting typos.

the Eagle gives it 4* and two talons up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great

This story was GREAT!!!! I love the way you slowly build to all three coming together at the end. I would love to read more about the three. I hope you plan on making this a series. Keep up the good no make that Great work up.

chunkschunksabout 11 years ago
Yes!

Great because it reads like a fresh idea. Those are few and far between. 5* for me, for that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
far out

it's a really groovy story man. needs a bit more foreplay though.

theanalisttheanalistover 10 years ago
5*

should have been longer(the build up)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Every Man's Fantasy

Your foreshadowing and intricate development made a believable conclusion, well done. If only it were so...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
5 star Fantasy!

good job.

linnearlinnearabout 5 years ago
So Good

Very nice. Quick and to the point, I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
More

I want more!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Pity there wasn't a follow-up on this one.

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