All Comments on 'The Medium Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
So far it's grrabbed me :)

Looking forward to more as the story grows. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
hmmmm

Not sure of what to make of their relationship..........

ranae1981ranae1981about 10 years ago
So far so good

but the relationship between Long Wei and her is strange to say the least hope you explain it a bit more in later chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Hmm.

Ah. the startingline was a platonic Hikaru Genji plot, but its going to turn into one of those trite were-mating bond stories. Just once, Id it like it build on the mood i've seen so far, her rejecting the advances. The Sun-witch at least has some respect for her boundaries.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great story!

This is a decent story, especially since it's your first time. Damn. I frickin hate you. I really want to know what happens next. PLEASE!! write the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Please hurry up and write more!

I love this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
More more!!!!

Please continue! It's got my attention and now I want to know what's next.

darkravenwolfdarkravenwolfabout 10 years ago
please continue

This story has completely captivated me and i would like to know how it ends or continues.

QuestionableRealityQuestionableRealityabout 10 years agoAuthor
The next chapter:

I have already submitted the next chapter to Lit. The story will be continued. Thank you for reading.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
i love this story already

And I have to read the second chapter to get into it.

How long does it take for the second chapter to go up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Please Continue

I just discovered this,please continue seems like a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Incredible

iT MAY BE A LONG TIME AGO SINCE THIS WAS SUBMITTED BUT IT NEEDS FINISHING ITS BRILLIANT!

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