by AnonymousPerv
Loved the descriptions of the protagonist feeling shy yet getting turned on by being looked at. Can't wait for chapter 2.
Very enjoyable start.
Hope you continue and we get to read about "The Meet" you tease in your author's note. Exciting tension far.
One correction: The word “aerobics” was not coined and publicized till the late sixties.
I felt it started out a bit slow, but I 👀this story being very good as it goes along.