All Comments on 'The Melody Maker'

I liked your story - it was a hot quickie.

However, this would have probably gone better in the category Erotic Couplings. In the Romance category people expect the story to include more about the people - how they met, how they were attracted to each other, maybe a bit about obstacles that were overcome before they were together, etc.

I hope you'll continue to write and post stories here on Literotica - this one shows promise.