All Comments on 'The Menders Ch. 01'

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flashgordon562006flashgordon562006about 6 years ago
Letdown

To me, it wss a letdown...sorry

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
oh my oh my

Please write another chapter! So hot

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great story!

Please write the next chapter! I absolutely love this story, how it depicts desire, care and concern for Rose. I love that the guys cherish her and want to show her how beautiful she is. This was a wonderfully refreshing read , especially compared to the many stories of gang bangs which depict torture and make me sorry I began to read in the first place.

Andygorn2Andygorn2almost 6 years ago
Stunning!

Wow, such a beautiful detailed story of a woman who wants to be loved for who she is and three men who are determined to show her how much they adore her. Could not be hotter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Me, Me, Me, I'm Next, Pick Me!!!

OMG! Soooo hot! I've been where she is. If only 3 hot guys had come along for me, I probably wouldn't have had to wait 50 years for my first orgasm. lol

HogwashHogwashover 5 years ago
I am so sad ... that it took me this long to find such a wonderful writer

Roze,

You are an excellent writer. I truly love the skillful dialogue that sets the tone and moves the story along simultaneously. The description of the apartment that the beautiful young lady took in at a glance as she first put a foot into the apartment ... it made the setting real.

Lovely, lovely, lovely work. Keep up the excellent writing, please! On to the next chapter!

:)

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My name is Roze. I am a proud BBW, and I am recently single. I am here to write and share erotic stories with the world. Some of the stories you read are based on my real life events. Some are fiction. The fun is in guessing which ones are which. :) The only "rule" I have is...

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