All Comments on 'The Mentalist'

Nice to find a good story in this category that's not about changing others because you can't get any in any other way. People with such abilities could still be good people. A good read.

I've enjoyed many of your stories. This one was one of the best. Even Literotica doesn't need every sexual detail all the time. Keep up the good work.

But I would be surprised if it were not.

Thank you

I for one would like a second chapter - these characters are interesting. DG and his asides - "guess smoking really can be hazardous to your health." Well done once again DGH.

Easy, fun read with a bit of mystery. The bad guys go directly to jail sans dollars . Great fun.

r u gonna make 2

Great Story

Nicely done!! Interesting characters. But a little more depth of their personality is needed . Especially of the Matt, friend, bodyguard.

His emotional distance from common humanity makes it difficult to develop conflict.

Original plot is very good for this site.

Maybe we will get some " fae " LW story.

Overall 2*s for emotional impact. 4*s for plot and dialogue. 5*s for the creative idea. So 4*s .

Thank You very much. Look forward to the next post, very much lol

AMerryMan

I don't know if it's sad or what, but I was enjoying the mind reading stuff so much, the sex was almost a distraction! I hope you continue to write and share your stuff. Thank you.

Loved this story #5 rating9e

who could ever believe this crap wants their brain examined....stick to reality....

Just continue the story. Enjoyed it.

It’s so obvious that you’re white. If you’re going to write from the perspective of a black person try to refrain from talking about racism. It doesn’t come of as authentic, and it’s weird.

Unique, absolutely unique, like all your stories. I have enjoyed every one of the stories you have posted here (with two more still to go) and am sorry you have not returned with another series of tales. In any case, thanx for the quite joyful read!

Fascinating, unique and enticing. I would like a chapter 2-5 (at least).

Masterpiece in my view.

5*

BJ