Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'The Metro Experience'

by Voicee

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 3 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
WOW

Great story idea, Borat.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Rough

Storytelling is 5 stars, but writing was 0 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Great idea, but can't make the pronouns match.

Storytelling : 5/5

Grammar : 0/5

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

The Metro Experience Pt. 02 Next Part
The Metro Experience Series Info