All Comments on 'The Metropolitan Affair Ch. 02'

Nice build Kriti...I just regret that I read this first and then later the Ch.1 I hope it would have been in correct order! This really shakes up your thing as does the prev chap. However I thing you could have built a little more on in this chapter in form of little pervert games or may be hand jobs or blow jobs or watching porn together or something. This chapter was a little small and left us wanting more..

However 8/10 for English this time and 9/10 for realism and 7/10 for Sexual Description

I liked the passionate description of the sex in terms of virginal anxiety, fear and eventually satisfaction. The scene was vividly written and detailed enough to arouse. Thanks for that. I'll check out the rest when it's here.

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It was superb!