All Comments on 'The Misadventures of Ms. Watson Ch. 01'

Loved the story. It would have been so much better without all the mistakes, though.

While your story is very good, your writing leaves a lot to be desired. If you had used a spell-check routine and better yet, someone to proofread your material, you probably would have been voted with five stars by all of the commenters.

Since you have indicated that this story is to be continued, I sincerely hope that you heed the suggestions for improving your writing.

The thought occurred to me that English is not your native language, and if that is true then certainly you need a proofreader. Get one prior to submitting the next installment, and do not be discouraged by the criticism.

To all that liked my story thank you for reading.

That sure makes it a full house, Now the boys can try the other Moms. It can become one hell of a story. thanks for the HOT READ. A FAN

I hate to dump on you but reading your story is like Chinese water torture. Please get an editor. You can detail a story but spell check and an editor would cure almost all the errors. Keep writing you can do it.

Alright just so you know I did try the editors on here. However, I shouldn't have to wait a month for them to edit a 10k word story. Now you like it great, if you don't oh well can't please everyone.

I love this idea! Son being oblivious to what's going on, his friends securing he's helpless and his hot mom finally fucking him.

Wha I would like to see in the next chapter, however is that son tries to escape and gets tied down once again. He was high and was loving it but when he comes back to his senses he realizes what happened and tries run as soon as his mother unties him. He escapes from his home and then they all try to find him and secure him once again.

Great!

Oh hmm interesting but already used it in another story.

"to" instead of "too"

"your" instead of "you're"

Questions that end with a period instead of a question mark.

So many errors, I eventually gave up trying to read this.

for your efforts. cant wait to hear more sharing but also the moms and the sons alone

Hard to believe that James needed so much encouragement.

Surprised his 2 friends needed grass to get him interested. No mention of what his 2 friends did to get him tied up.

Can't wait to get the sharing between all three women and boys.

What a fun time sharing different pussy's with each other.

Please ignore the grammar nazi's. These are people who haven't the talent to write themselves and overly criticize those that do in order to compensate.

Ignore the egomaniacs and please continue writing as your stories are exciting and interesting to read :)

What a bunch of scum of the earth whores...LOL!

It appears that the most critical comments about the writing come from people that have not written anything. Maybe they should try it themselves before throwing stones.

It's was a good story that has promise of follow up, keep trying...

Question should I add another chapter to this story?

It really interests me to find out how the story will go. Will there be an orgy where everyone will fuck James, will he remain tied etc.

I hope you will add another chapter.

You left the story open to a sequel and you have my support to do it!

you definitely should, it's an interesting theme and it needs some closure between James, his mother and his/her friends.

Ok, part two is in the works.

Just letting y'all know part two for this story is with my editor.

Can't wait for it!

Ok, just letting you all know the second part has just been submitted. So it should be out here in a few days.

That was pretty damn hot and I'm sure part two will be as well.

For some reason, it not only reads better, but feels better. It's seems hotter, still three on three, now that's MOTHER and SON incest too the fullest. ........Again great read.

THANKS

More, please.

In general I liked the story. A couple shortfalls. Why did they have to drug him and tie him up? one would have sufficed, but neither should have been necessary. Especially the drugging. How well will he remember everything, especially her questions! Plus, if she wants honest answers from him, how can she expect them when he is drugged and tied up? Other than that, a good story

In the first paragraph it states her marriage has been for 10 years how would she have a nearly adult son

Reluctant son genre is really old and never very good. This one was no exception.