All Comments on 'The Mission of the Heart Ch. 03'

This story gets better with every chapter, I don't know how you can improve on it. Can't wait to read more of it.

I can't believe what happened :O Please write more, I have to know what happens between these two.

More Please

Kick college's ass and write more please!!!

I like how you went back an forth between scenes. I did get upset when she shot Pamela though, lol. Hope you continue this and "Fighting for her."

charlie shot pamela b/c she knew she had a bullet proof vest on right???

youre doing here, but i have a major question that been bugging me since the second chapter. what does charlie do that makes her a target at first, and then useful to the agency that they want to protect her? there is definitely more to charlie than meets the eye since she proclaims to be naive and yet knows how to use a gun like when she had pam handcuffed to a chair in her room.

I love it!!! I hope you write more soon!!

LOVE IT!!!!

Please finish this story. What happens to Charlie? Will Pamela heal and find her in time? Gosh, the suspense is killing me.

T?? continuation. I really would like to see how it pens out, but also why Charlie is being targeted and protected.

i do hope that you will continue to write the whole chapter of this story.though it is worth waiting for but please don`t leave us hanging on in vain. (cinder)

Your an amazing writer......... PLEASE continue this story I want to see what happens with pamela.... I'm also interested to see what direction your gonna go with charlie and pamela's relationship!!!!!

Wow...please more happy ending please i need to know

Omggggg..... Plz finish the story , both are not finished I'm dying 2 know what happens ...,

Your writing is beautiful, love the stories but Plz continue them

I love your two main stories you have written please please please PLEASE continue them I know your busy and its worth the wait but I can't wait to see what direction your gonna take them in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

As a avid bond fan,a Quiller fan,& other numerous agent type fiction,please finish/continue this series,get Carrie to show her love for 76,anything just continue.Oh did I say WELL DONE

I love love love this story...and I desperately want it wrapped up...even if it takes some time leave a comment letting us know you are working on it...

you should please rap this story up, cause the anticipation might as well kill me!!!!!!!!!!1

that is brilliant

Please continue I absolutely love this story.

You are my new favorite author!! Please finish the story soon!! :)

holy shit, I literally gasped out loud, please carry on :D

Not liking the fact that it ended like that !!!

I love the stories, hope you find the time and energy to start writing again!

Omg i didnt see that coming it was like BANG! Plz keep writing i need to know what happens i hope pamela and charlie end together but star crosslovers never end happily ever after look what happen to romeo and juilet lol but i hope it ends up happy keep up the good work hope you write back soon ill be waiting for the story- cheers

I seriously hope you finish this story someday, I would love to read more about the characters and development.

76 deserves a happy ending! ^.^

FINNNNIIISSSHHHH THE STORY ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

I love this story, I have read it twice and each time I wish you would finish it already! Other than a few errors on past and present tense- It was amazing!

Youve got to finish this now!! I hate waiting for an ending if one is never goin to come. :( please finish this its the best story ever! Make it a happy ending please!!

Finish this already!!!!!

I'm begging u please finish I have read this story over 6 times and I check every day to c if you have made another entry please finish!!!

Please write an ending! It's been so long!

Please finish already u owe this to your readers and don't start a story if you don't plan on finishing it

Nah man, please finish it.

I'm furious that you really didn't finish this book it's so amazingly good I can't right now FINISH ITtTtTtTtt

Like seriously, u need to finish the story

I must know how it ends!!!

Please finish this story

I hope you've written more!! This is absolutely moving... I felt the heartache within my chest for Pamela. I hope you've more chapters to update because your writing is captivating. Please consider writing more to the series. Soon [o_0]

I'm soooo excited to finish the story..but when I saw the to be continued thing!! I just wanna scream and worst it is last written on 2011 and its already 2014.what d??

What d hell author?I'm frustrated because u didn't finish this story..

I'm gonna save the link of this story and hopefully u will be able to write till the end it.thank u..

Please finish!!!

PLEASE WRITE

MORE!!!!

Hi guys,

Sorry school is kicking my ass right now, but I managed to submit the fourth chapter a couple of hours ago. The last chapter should be up sometime soon, just for the heads up!

Hi guys,

chapter four is here: www.literotica.com/s/the-mission-of-the-heart-ch-04

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Very well done, I love it! Thank you!

Write more! I loved your prequel and love this too! Your writing is so good and the storylines amazing.