All Comments on 'The Mission of the Heart Ch. 02'

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Anonymousover 13 years ago

Great story telling. I liked the first part very much. But, I think you changed the track on which you were before. Please, don't make the story too complicated. And of course I will be desperate for the next submission.

Anonymousover 13 years ago

Thank god!

I'm so glad you've continued writing. I hope you continue your other series as well. I can't wait to read what else you have in store!

Anonymousover 13 years ago

Glad you came back

I thought you had stopped posting stories, I hope you continue this, I love your stories.

kedycheeks over 13 years ago

awesome!!!!

please hurry up and post the other chapter the story is awesome and has me on the edge. great writing skills and editing. keep up the good work

Anonymousabout 13 years ago

great

please write chapter 3 soon,very nice story

Anonymousalmost 13 years ago

FANTASTIC!!!!!!

PLEASE!!!! More, it's a great story. So many girls want her, will she be a slut or a one woman gal? I want to know.

quiverclaw over 12 years ago

whoa!

didnt see that coming! love the action!

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Hello :) I'm a physical therapist student by day and writer at night. I've been trying to do a three part prequel to the mission of the heart series. I love war, action, horror stories and I especially love erotic lesbian stories. In some other sites, I go under the name Gi...

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