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Click here"Thank you baby," she breathed once we parted. "That was exactly what I needed."
I couldn't resist the chuckle I felt bubbling up inside me. "Anytime," I said, letting my hands roam down her back. A mischievous thought rushed through my mind and I added, "Mommy."
She echoed my chuckle. "That was weird. Sorry."
"I loved it," I said. "I love you."
"Oh Sam..." she said, her face breaking out into a happy smile that could light up a room. "I love you too. I always have and I always will."
The shower we decided to sneak in after that was almost as amazing as hearing her say those words. Dad came home while we were in there but other than exchanging a few words with her through the door he didn't bother us.
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- COMMENTS
Comentarista82almost 8 years agoAt least this is the part where Claire proves valuable for planning. Love how this 'plan' is hatched yet you obscure it from us--and I can't guess what it could be. Nice way to provide an out, give away part of the ending (potentially) yet still place some danger in the air. The closing sequence with Ava was ultra hot, and even funny with Claire's "eww" since it seemed she was so devious she wouldn't have a sense of humor. An easy 5!
nikycalmost 8 years agoAuthor@Anonymous: Interesting:
Thank you! Claire sure is a crazy one. Glad you're enjoying it!
@Anonymous: Well, hell.:
Thank you for your comment! Maybe that is the plan yes. Maybe it isn't :3 Sorry. Next part is coming up soon.
@Anonymous: Loving it:
Thank you! Ava and Sam are fun to write. Claire and Nicholas are too, but for different reasons. I'm happy you're enjoying one side of the story!
@Eric_Shift:
Thank you so much! Yes the last part was mean. But then again, Claire is supposed to be mean and selfish. There won't be any more Claire only parts though. That part was basically her setup.
@bigrednot:
Thank you so much for your feedback! It probably is a little over the top. That's okay though. I'm having fun writing it. Glad you're enjoying my writing style. Next part is coming up soon, a day or two depending on submission time.
bigrednotalmost 8 years agoThe sexual side of your story is great. But with the actual relationships and the way they intertwine, that puts your story OVER THE TOP.
This site has some fantastic writers and I would put you in the upper echelon.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Eric_Shiftalmost 8 years agoThis chapter was very good at explaining the relationships of the two couples. Last chapter was off-putting. So much that I think it was wasted on the sister and her chosen.
Please don't ask me to explain it, I don't understand why myself.
Can't help but be intrigued by this plan that they have.
I, Now, am looking forward to more.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoSam and Ava just feels so right. The parts they have together are way more interesting then Claire and Nicholas. I really hope they turn out okay and get to be together, I honestly don't care about the other two though
Anonymousabout 8 years agoI was the last anonymous on Part 2, wanting Nicholas and Claire to get their comeuppance. Making the two complicit in a plan with Ava and Sam changed my opinion slightly, but only to perhaps get Claire in over her head, or put in a position of real fear (not just of losing control) just so she is not a sociopath with murder on her mind. One way out would be to entangle Dan, Rose, and Liam together. Perhaps that IS the plan.
Well, now that I am caught up, I look forward to seeing how you develop this! My opinion of your writing skill is unchanged. It is stellar.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoReally like this almost 'clue' like feel to the story. Though no one has been murdered...yet. Claire does display psychotic tendencies though, so who knows? Actually myself, I would like to see Ava feed Claire a face full of muff to go along with that handprint. Just to let her know she's not the only crazy lady around and that's she's not completely running the show. Well done my friend. Eager for the next installment.
nikycabout 8 years agoAuthor@sshh1:
Interesting guess. Maybe. Maybe not. Sorry :3
Glad you're enjoying it!
sshh1about 8 years agoSo my guess is Nik and Ava will get married and they'll all live together? Am I close?
nikycabout 8 years agoAuthor@BG187:
Thank you for the comment! Yes I suppose i should address this area at some point. Thank you for pointing it out to me.
@Bluebomber5:
Thank you so much! It's clear that you put in a lot of thought into your comments. It's very appreciated. Funny that you mention the sex scenes being just right. This part was running a little long so the first thing that got cut into was the sex. I'm glad i didn't overdo it.
I agree that it would be interesting to see things from other perspectives. Part four does delve a little into Daniels thoughts. Not directly but through dialogue mostly. I do want to keep the narration to Claire and Sam though.
Without spoiling anything I'll say this though, the story title refers to more than just the events in part one.
@Anonymous: pregnant ???:
I think everyone likes a good dick. Guys like having them and gals like getting them. Not sure Sam's the kind of guy who compare though. Do guys really do that or is that just a stereotype? Who knows.
@JayHailey:
Hi! Thank you for your comment! Sam only knows about his sisters relationship with Nicholas. He doesn't know about the wicked things they do together. If he knew about the drugging... well i don't exactly know how he would react. Glad you're enjoying the Sam/Ava side of things though.
