All Comments on 'The Monotony of Lust Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Sloppy

The first part and this could of been all one chapter. Separating something so short into two chapters was not necessary.

arrowglassarrowglassabout 10 years ago
AWESOME!

Lusty sensuality...steaming...awaiting more..please!

mcollectmcollectabout 10 years ago
What?

This should have been chapter 1

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