All Comments on 'The Monster in My Bed'

Amazing work

Sexy bitch!

Great work hunny!

😚

The fantasy is fairly hot, but your writing is too wordy in a way that adds no detail to the story.

Mostly a dud

Hot story baby.... makes a great start to my day.

When is you next one coming?

This really sucked

No build up or foreplay. Descriptions need more sizzle.

...until you've taken some creative writing courses. Christ, this was bad.

Great writing, it really captured the feel of a taboo relationship. Hot!

A very well written, literate and very erotic story! This got me going from the opening paragraph!

My favorite part was where she orgasm-ed as he was counting down! omg!

This is a great story! Very hot! You have talent and this story was a pleasure to read. In more ways than one. Keep writing!

Isn't it funny all the negative comments are anonymous? Pussies. Don't listen to the haters. They are a collective group of sexually frustrated douche bags., Keep up the good work TSB!

W O W. nothing short of AMAZING! You have a gift. It is especially meaningful and helpful to me because I am still learning about DDLG and how to be the best daddy and how to balance tenderness and non-sexual engagement with rough sex. And what to say and how to say it...when, etc etc. So, VERY well done and extremely helpful. Thank you!

I’ve read a lot of stories on Literotica in the past 6 years, and this is one of the best. I actually came at the end of the countdown, so thanks for that lol.