by The_Trouvere
Very nice start! Look forward to chapter 2.
Nice to see someone who takes their time, and not just wham bam...
Again, look forward to next installment.
This story is extremely well written. On top of that it describes a mutually satisfactory solution to a problem that doesn't technically involve incest. The feelings are presented in a real way and both of the characters are believable and likeable.
Beautifully done and most definitely has to be continued ; how can a loving father refuse to make love to a daughter who loves him and wants him to make love to her ?
An easy and uncomplicated story though one with a good premise on which to build. I look forward to your next
installment(s).
Regards
I sure hope you don't just leave it like this! You need a 2nd chapter and more - Let's see how the "new" arrangements work out > Joan @ The JERSEY SHORE
I would like to thank everyone who has commented on my story. This story came to me spontaneously. If a second chapter comes to me spontaneously, I will write it and post it. I can see the father and daughter visiting locations where he took his wife and her mother when they were dating. I can describe with greater detail them having mutual masturbation, taking showers together, and stuff like that. They will not have sexual intercourse, however. Any "incest" story I write will also be "nosex."