All Comments on 'The Morning After'

Well done for your first attempt. Im still typing mine XD The only problem is it has no story line and context which is to make it really interesting

I sent you private feedback :)

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Thank you for posting. Five stars.

If you private message me I may be able to help you with your writing. I don't mind trying to help you and I may add more to this later haven't decided yet

Thank You for your feed back I wasn't expecting to see that this morning and I am glad you commented what you had to say. :)

For a first time, it was quite good. If it could bring Me to "attention", then at least I know I liked it!

Thank you for the feedback its very appreciated.

For your first posting, this was really good. I only wish you had fleshed out the ending more. It ended too quickly. I wanted more! Keep writing! Your stories and style are very easy to read and get caught up in the scenes.

I must thank you for such complements. I must admit this story isn't finished yet this is just the start of a two or three part story. I really wish to hear more from those of you reading and I am getting back to all the feedback as fast as I can.

I very much enjoyed reading this. Very sweet and sexy.

Thank you for the feedback on here I greatly appreciate what you who read this think.

I liked the story and throughout, I could feel erotic. waiting for the fun to continue the whole day and expect more of dominance.

I appreciate the feedback but I am not sure how to continue from here. If you give me some time I can probably work something out. I am currently working on the night before, which is where this story is coming from basically. I wrote this before I started on the night before and with my new insight on erotica writing I plan on continuing writing and improving as I go. I would love to work on something a little more romantic than this, but that's because I am female. I really appreciate your feedback and I hope to have the night before up before too long, also I hope to have this one finished before to long.

Great short short story .. need an agent for your stories kidding

Thanks but i am not that good at writing as much as you like it :P

I have decided that I will continue with this story. In fact you might look for it to be completely wrote all over again so that there is plenty of details that I know now that I didn't back then. Watch for it