All Comments on 'The Morning After'

by Ashson

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tazz317tazz317over 6 years ago
I WONDER IF THE HUBBY REALIZES

that a good time was had by some, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More rapey shit

From the rape-meister.

26thNC26thNCover 6 years ago
#1

Worst story I've seen here in a while and that is all I'm going to say about that.

jesemmojesemmoover 6 years ago
???

Don't give up your day job.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 6 years ago
One way or Another

Either the bridegroom or his father had to fill the egregious first night void.

Full marks * * * * *

ju8streadingju8streadingover 6 years ago

what happened after hubby woke up?

ReedRichardsReedRichardsover 6 years ago
Ash son always gets a 4 from me . . .

. . . but I think I’ll give this one a 5. It’s his typical lighthearted flash story, with no moral to it, just written for fun. His stories should be read in that vein, and not taken seriously.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
i didn't get

my new year's wish, that was for you to go away and take your teenage fantasies with you your stories are about as entertaining as having a broken leg.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Would you mind pointing out which trailer they lived in?

Let me guess, the one with the police tape around it.

I bet she's not bored anymore.

But I do wish you would have described her father in law's last pulse of life, after his son cut his throat with a bread knife.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I'd spent years beating off boys

and marriage wasn't going to tame the slut in me, after all I said I only liked my husband, i didn't love him... I only needed him for support... not sex. "0"

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I really don't understand

why some of these moralizing assholes demean themselves to come onto Literotica!!

From the way they are always moaning about one thing or another they'd be better off in Sunday School!!

"Literotica" is a site for EROTIC FANTASY!!

Anything can be done, and be 'acceptable', in FANTASY!!

If you don't understand that then go swivel!!

bruce22bruce22over 6 years ago
Fairly Painful

The idea of delivering my daughter into a situation like this would be quite painful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
re:anonymous- I don't understand

What's to understand asshole. Everybody has their own idea of what erotica means to them, so fuck off moron.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Read most of your stuff..

This was simply a huge disappointment...maybe your next one will be back up to par.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
garbage

1*

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 6 years ago
I usually like Ashson’s work.

Ashson usually meets the restricted definition of LW (an account including an adventurous married woman) and that remains true here. However, it is pretty sterile until SOME consequence obtains to the couple’s marital relationship. The degree to which that is not just missing, but also hard to foresee in the reasonably near future, make this much seem better housed in Incest or Erotic Coupling than LW!

TwentysevenTwentysevenover 6 years ago
As you do

Happens all the time.

prinnaveaprinnaveaabout 6 years ago
The story tags

Again loved the ending LOL seems her morning was looking up. :)

LW is where it belongs,hell she just got married that makes a wife yes? David it is the father to Brian. yes? So no incest. duh. Side tag would be ncns/reluc yep fits perfect with LW

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
No more????

Disappointing to say the least. I expected more sex and some sort of excitement to finish the story. Dullsville.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
WTF???!!!???? Yo stupid or what ? 100% crap.

👎🖕

Just_WordsJust_Wordsalmost 3 years ago

Did I read this correctly? A trusting brand new husband is asleep while his wife and father are having sex? What a vile concept! Divorce her as fast as possible and beat the father to death.

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