All Comments on 'The Morning After'

I really enjoyed the way you gradually built up to the climax, and then left me wanting more. I hope there is a chapter two.

... it's GOTTA have a second chapter - otherwise, it's not really a story (without a conflict resolution). I've favorited you as an author so I'll see the resolution. And (spoiler alert) most of us LOVE a HAPPY ending! :)

@AverageBear

A second part is forthcoming. . .

The way this story was written was truly amazing, and you are a very talented author. The story flowed amazingly and the way the characters acted made it feel as if they were actually real people and that this could’ve actually happened, which is not the case in more and more stories these days. Your use of descriptive language was also really good and definitely added to the story and helped me visualize what exactly was happening. Hats off to you

Till tried going shades. Too soon in sexual relationship for that rubbish.