All Comments on 'The Moroccan Castle'

There is a case to be made for bondage literature, but I found this distasteful. Read Paul Bowles' Sheltering Sky. Better stuff there. You write quite well; I suppose my opinion is on subject matter. I know women (and men) have fantasies about domination. But my point is that all sex, including BDSM should be consensual. Perhaps I'm too critical. Others may find this a nasty fantasy, a la Hans Christian Anderson.

Good luck. Keep writing. Jacque

this very much. i would however like to see it taken to the next level and written further on, you have a great basis for a nice series here and could be used to make a nice long sensual read...hot hot hot..more please. i'd like to see where you go with this one. Thank you for sharing, a fan in Texas

Don't normally comment on these stories, but am getting interested in producing some of my own, so am interested in the style, and format.

One thing I noticed was that the point of view was constantly shifting, and seemed to change in mid sentence. Also, some of the spelling needs correcting - letters left off the ends of words etc. If English is not your first language, I understand the difficulty of getting it entirely right.

Otherwise, good story.

Good story, but it ends in the middle of nowhere !!

What happens when Elizabeth is taken to the Oasis ??

What became of Sister Katharine ??

At least two more storys here !!