All Comments on 'The Mother'

What are you 10 years old, learn to write properly. If they had no stars that is what you deserve

mmmmmmm.....wow that as so hot. Don't stop now. give us more.

XOXO Heather Lynn

Don't stop now gives us more did they make love the next night did her daughter find out did they have a 3 some come on man give us more.

CH. 2 PLS

It's not incest but still fun. Ignore people who say to stop. Just try to make it more readable, with quotes. But as long as you enjoy it, keep doing it

Its not incest but it is taboo? And I'm pretty sure the category is called incest/taboo. Duh.

Hi there, Good story, so many guys go

for a hot looking woman. NO incest here

and frankly I doubt it was taboo. If the husband

does not not or can't satisfy his wifes needs,

WELL that is a real taboo.

So Susan got a little action one night, I am glad

for her.

Fucking mom and her daughter is really hot and erotic. Keeping the daughter from finding out is priceless.

Thanks for the read.

Story would have been ok but OMG does not belong in literature unless you have a very good reason. You used it at least 4 times in 7 sentences, and for no apparent reason. Sorry, but this made me actively dislike the story.

usually leave comments for great or very stupid stories, with this one NOTHING...and yeh, quit with stupid OMG. What are you 13 y. old????

To Mr. OMG Never.

Why are you trying to come across

as "Holier than thou"? I don't think for a minute

bhockey47 meant any disrespect towards God.

It is 47's right to say what he wants. Maybe you

should read "readers digest."

The end of the story made me think the daughter wanted the sex. Clear up the focus so things are not misleading. Meaning I want to know it was mother or daughter speaking. The story led me to believe the boyfriend always stays at girlfriend's home? I'm not going any deeper than to say the story construction needs work.

RS

daughter has to know and approve so it will fit the incest cat or change genre

where is chapter 2