All Comments on 'The Mother-In-Law Ch. 02'

by luvjuice43

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hebert100hebert100over 9 years ago
HOT

this story is so HOT. thanks

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 9 years ago
Good writing but needs a little dysfunction to make it truely sizzle

I like the MIL character, but she's too sane and balanced for a woman who hasn't been schutupped right for a long, long time. The overall aura of mutual discovery and gratification is VERY good, however. Me being me, I'm looking for momentary misunderstandings, the little awkward pauses that occur inevitably while mapping out new erotic territories.

As a fan of women ' of a certain age' , the high regard for Marie is well described, much appreciated and paramont. - a very sweet read.

chytownchytownover 9 years ago
That Was Hot!!!****

Thanks for sharing. What happen to the hot lava. lol

oldtwitoldtwitover 1 year ago

You’re descriptions are good, you’re characters are good

Hippie620Hippie6202 months ago

Noce story, the 'cod sac' and excessive description of ejaculation was a bit distracting.

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