All Comments on 'The Mother-In-Law Ch. 06: Final'

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Sorry but I feel you lost interest in this, it reads as if you just couldn’t get to the end fast enough, it could have been a really good story, every part of it, but you’re writing style is lacking somehow, I wish I could help put you on the right path but I can’t.

I agree with @oldtwit.

I felt there were too many directions introduced and then left with no further input.

MC marriage appears good, wife induces Catholic mother into fold and then the story direction begins to falter.

From that point, a random ex boyfriend, divorce, unhappy ex wife yearning for her Ex's dick (while carrying next baby), then ex wife yearning for mother, then a business , phew!

Oh well it is only fiction!