All Comments on 'The Mother Unravelled'

Either this is incomplete or the ending was rather abrupt.

Seems more like the story unravelled. So then what happened?

I love this story. It's hot. But it needs more. It ended a bit to soon.

I will write more chapters based on this theme..............

More

Is that all,

Oh yes!

only one chapter in this series, you have to finish it, it was just getting good

Literotica you really need a better screening process on what stories you allow posted cause this story is beyond bad

Woah! Mfkndragon. Be careful criticizing any author on this site or you'll be labeled a hater/troll. Especially if you yourself have not written a story. In the words of Greta Thunberg "how dare you" opinions are not an expression of honesty they are to pontificate just ask the odd "bird"