All Comments on 'The Motorcycle'

by TxRad

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
The Romantic way to rebuild a Motorcycle

Wonderful down-to-earth story of two people who find they are kindred souls. How enjoyable to read the warm sweet believable story of Greg and C.C. This is enough to make a person want to go out and buy a motorcycle and look for a girl like C.C.

Heartwarming story well written!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great

Romance and the Art of Motorcycle Repair.

Boyd

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Felt like home.

Something about this felt like poetry....with a slow sweet ryhem bringing two people together

JonTaylorJonTayloralmost 12 years ago
OK I'm Hooked

Chapter one, right? Chapter two? I think maybe some flashback by both to establlish the hard life both had to get to this point. Maybe going deeper into this karma line you started between them. Just pondering. Good writing with no ending inspires this line.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
where is the rest of it ?

Ok, you got a good start, now, go ahead with the story ! Too good to stop here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

If only they all happened that easily.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
wonderful start

I really hope that this is just the beginning of this story. I really want to see what happens and maybe a flashback to where they met before.

SampkyangSampkyangabout 8 years ago
WOW

THAT was good TxRad! Thanks

PickeringPickeringalmost 7 years ago
Great story!

One of your best.

Thank you for writing this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Oh man, that girl has spunk, spark, fire. Whatever you want to call it. Well played author. Now when do we get the rest...?

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