All Comments on 'The Motorcycle Adventure'

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louguy35louguy35about 18 years ago
Bullshit!

BULLSHIT!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
I liked it

Forget Bullshit, I thought it was a good read, Its possible for this to happen and sure wish something like that could happen to me (dreaming). Keep up the good work there are lots of us that enjoy.

peggytwittypeggytwittyabout 18 years ago
Nice erotic coupling with some romance

I found this short fantasy more an erotic coupling, as there was so little interaction between the characters of romance just sex. There was no description of how she was feeling or thinking about him or him about her. The story was very short but a nice one-night stand.

I don’t understand someone going to romance genre and saying “bullshit” and giving no reason for his rant. Oh well, to each their own.

Keep writing

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