All Comments on 'The Mountain Bike Ride'

by superdebs

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Why would you break up with baby's father? If that was me, you'd have to kill me to keep me away from my daughter

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Then start

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Bad dialogue

The impregnation fantasy is hot, but people don't talk like that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A job well done

He got it up her reel deep and shot it in 9 months later

5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Nice one

Very romantic way to get knocked up

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Loved It! Slow Down!

Take time to develope your story lines. Nice start, waiting for more from you. Left wanting relief!

Barepussylover

SunBBCSunBBCalmost 7 years ago
Very nice - great perspective!

Thank you for sharing this story.

Always intense to hear from a girl's point of view.

Having bred numerous white girls, it's hot to hear that you like receiving a bull's seed as much as we enjoy planting it!

Keep writing and best wishes. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Rushed

Really rushed

superdebssuperdebsabout 7 years agoAuthor

Thank you Barebacking.

It was actually an intense experience when I wanted to get pregnant when I gave up my virginity.

BarebackingMichelleBarebackingMichelleabout 7 years ago
Love It.

Loved how you describe what she wanted and was thinking. Really hot impregnation.

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