All Comments on 'The Mountain Girl Ch. 02'

by Shaima32

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TheReticentWriterTheReticentWriteralmost 7 years ago

Love the development of the story. Zoe seems to be a take charge kind of person while Heidi is a bit more shy or not as assertive. It will be interesting to see how things progress.

JoyJoy4MeJoyJoy4Mealmost 7 years ago

So far so good. Looking forward to next installment.

CorinnePapillonCorinnePapillonalmost 7 years ago
Love where this could go....

A great start - thank you for all the effort you out in! I am grateful for the day I discovered your writing....

With affection and thanks

Corinne

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenalmost 7 years ago
Great story so far

I loved chapter 1 & 2, and am really looking forward to chapter 3 and beyond. Thank you for sharing it with us!

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