All Comments on 'The Mountain Girl Ch. 04'

by Shaima32

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MaonaighMaonaighalmost 7 years ago
Another great story...

...nicely rounded off. Keep 'em coming!

LinneaLundinLinneaLundinalmost 7 years ago
Very satisfying

Thanks for this wonderful story. Heidi and Zoe are great characters that could stand to be revisited for further adventures.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Such depravity...

Nothing screams 'I am depraved' like Ubuntu.

rusty333rusty333almost 7 years ago
great story

Another great story, really enjoy them. thanks

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenalmost 7 years ago
Enjoyed this chapter too!

Can't wait for the next! Thanks for sharing this with us!

RenataAsheRenataAshealmost 7 years ago
Lovely

I love happy endings or is there another chapter to this story. The two girls have finally found love beautiful.

TheReticentWriterTheReticentWriterover 6 years ago
You continue to amaze me.

What a great chapter, I'm a sucker for a happy ending. You built up the story so well and didn't disappoint me with this chapter. I don't think there's anything you've written that I haven't enjoyed. I loved the interaction between Heidi and Zoe and you're writing of their love scene.

Thanks so much and I hope that sometime you'll let us know how they're doing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
What an author

I have been reading all your stories and they are amazing. Thanks for sharing your talent/

foxyfowlerfoxyfowleralmost 4 years ago
Perfect

I hope there is still more too come as this is an amazing story about two lovers who found each other very moving and true to life stories thank you Shamia32. xx

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 3 years ago
Another 5 star story

Great love story and with some more pages your stories spiraling up with more emotions more details more get together action and so on

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenalmost 3 years ago

I had to read this story again, and loved it just as much as the first time. Thank you very much for sharing this with us!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Great story. I'm happy to read all your stories and find myself wondering how much of what you write is from personal experience as they are so realistic. Thanks for sharing

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