All Comments on 'The Mousy Librarian is Blackmailed'

by lewiscreed

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CHL88CHL88over 7 years ago
Nice start

There are plenty of these sorts of stories on Lit, but this one appears to off to a more promising start than some of the others.

We could use more background on the mousy librarian, what she's done or never done and why or why not, and whether she's consciously or unconsciously interested in further debauchery. A good back story could add a chapter or two and help explain the present.

Sex with students in a way that does not violate Lit's guidelines would be cool, too. If you decide to go IR, please avoid behavioural stereotypes.

CHL88CHL88over 7 years ago
Forgot to mention...

Nice first submission. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Looking forward to more

Let us know when the next one is up?

lewiscreedlewiscreedover 7 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback!

I have submitted a second story that I hope will appear in the next couple days, and working on one for the holiday contest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
This story simply BEGS for a sequel! Please provide one for us, Master Lewis!!

This tale simply BEGS for a sequel (or two.) Please provide it (them) for us Master Lewis!!

YOMEYOl

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