by marcy1238
Extremely well written. Beautiful character build up. And hot sex scenes, even if a little nasty, the best kind.haha There are directions from here that could lead to many hours of pleasurable reading and stroking off. Hope you will continue, you have a real talent that excites me and makes me want to cum along with you. Richard
Very similar to Chapter 1. She has gone far too far far too quickly to be realistic. Still who wants realism, well me actually.
Personality, opinion and perception do not often change as quickly as hers. From porn being a perversion to indulging in it in a day???
Still Marcy, excellent writing, but I feel it needs a little more passion and use of some more basic descriptions at times. The odd cunt and cock adds flavour and colour!
Any ideas who left this????