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Click hereLong minutes later, as we were cuddling, Laura said "So you're still on this case of this football player?"
"For now." I said. "I'm afraid that the politics are going to get ugly, though, since he's on the football team. I'm hoping that it's some kind of natural causes or accident and we can find out what happened and close the case, but..." I paused, thinking.
"But...?" Laura queried, to make me finish.
"But I don't think it's that simple." I said. "And I think this kid was murdered."
To be continued...
- COMMENTS
Ravey19over 2 years agoYes, it's complicated and a long set of stories but I'm giving it a go and see the writer developing as the storyline progresses. Not a good memory so cannot remember all the details but, on balance, enjoying the journey so far
mcbsover 3 years agoAfter reading this series, I went back to the beginning, Where Don and Melanie, and Laura first appear. In this series, Don is described, as having gone on active duty, after ROTC, then becoming a cop. In the original series, as well as the next part Interludes, he gets some sort of IT job straight out of college, gets hired by the campus police, and goes to the Police Academy at age 28.
In this series, Don is some sort of tough guy. In the original series, he's a candy ass wimp, and a willing cuck. I can understand, the author changing the story line, to toughen him up a bit. Even so, the author failed to fill in the gap of his missing years of active duty as an ROTC commissioned Army Officer. Totally inconsistent character development.
mcbsover 3 years agoYears ago there was a TV show, about Vampires, who are out in the open. A football player dies while having sex with a female vampire. The Vampires worry how to spin this, so it won't be a PR disaster for them. I forget the name of the series.
Anonymousover 10 years agoThanks for the response re: Interlude 10. Wasn't sure if it might have had any bearing on this story. As usual, I gave you a 5. Love reading your work as well as RecHiker.
Dan
SparksWillFlyover 10 years agoAfter reading the lead paragraph about all the series, etc., I decided to move on. Seems like a serious commitment when all I want is some entertainment.
WifeWatchmanover 10 years agoAuthorInterlude 10 hasn't been published yet, but will be coming soon. It has no bearing on The Murdered Football Player mystery, which you can try to solve without reading any other series. WW
Anonymousover 10 years agoLove this series, but only found through Interlude 9 before this one.
