All Comments on 'The Muse Pt. 02'

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winterreisserwinterreisserabout 8 years ago
Tantalising!

A teaser, so what next?

A comment - needs editing as there are a number of glitches which need your attention and why only one page per story?

Really does need expanding, more detailing would not come amiss either but it still merits a 4.

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