All Comments on 'The Muse Pt. 03'

Yes, definitely the heat is rising. Introducing the girl friends a good move allowing the story to be filled out perhaps?

Still only a page at a time which is really too tantalising for this reader at least.

Much less editing needed, which at a page a time really should not be required atall.

So got a deserved 5 star.

Such "HOT" prose to "paint" a word picture...very well done!