All Comments on 'The Mysterious Stranger Pt. 02'

I like your stories, I have given this story five stars. So I hope this is taken as supportive critique. The one complaint is that the scenes go by too quickly, without enough explorations of the feelings, the sights and sounds...... You write well, and have a wicked imagination. I hope you dive in deeper to each little vignette

I love to have a wife or girlfriend like this. I can't wait for the next chapter. Awesome story!!!!!!!!!!