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I collapsed on the beach and caught my breath before heading back to the "theater."
I popped up on the other side and it looked like the girls hadn't even moved. They were laying there sprawled on top of each other just like I'd left them. I walked up to them. "You two okay?"
Kelly's eyes fluttered open. "Oh my god Brad," was all she could muster.
Kim didn't even bother to open her eyes. "Well, you've pretty much ruined every other fantasy I've had or will have for the rest of my life." She smiled.
Kelly opened her eyes again. "I had a brief thought that maybe I shouldn't ask you to do this. You know how real life can never live up to a fantasy that you cooked up in your head to be perfect? That was better than anything I could have dreamt."
I lay down next to her in the soft sand and looked up at the blue sky.
She rolled her head onto my shoulder and arm and whispered in my ear, "I love you."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoWould love to be up to my balls and tonsils in these two lush cunts, getting drunk on their cunt juice. Cunt crazed sex maniac uk.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoI love how it's not just an erotic story, but you've incorporated feelings and a little romance. you had me hooked from the first paragraph. you should write an actual book!
LUSTYWHEELSalmost 13 years agogreat story 2 gorgeous ladies on a sailboat with me I'm with ya look at you go bro well done! please don't stop telling this story a chapter for every 1 of the 10days.
Privates1stClassover 13 years agothere are only five stars I can award to your story. I can't think of a better fantasy than screwing two beautiful chicks on a deserted Caribbean beach. And there's more--on to Chapter 4. Truly an amazing story.
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoThis was a great read, PLEASE continue the story and publish on here asap please! Love the characters, the story, how well its written.
Great story keep it up! :)
cheers!
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoGreat stuff! thanks for writing- really hot with excellent characters. I love it! More please :-)
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoI cannot tell you how much I have enjoyed reading this series. Your mastery of storytelling makes for a sensuous, romantic ride through the lives of your characters. Good luck to you wherever you are, but please continue the story! Thanks again!
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoSuspend disbelief for a second to the few who could not get past the sand. The rest of it I can only describe as amazing the story was so visualy graphic my imagination was going nuts! Please write more and soon.
Gray
ps I also understand the sexuality of people being familier with each other which makes the story even hotter!
