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All Comments on 'The Mystic-Party Girl Down'

by MrTheDevilMan25

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LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 12 years ago
Gave it a 4

It would have been worth a 5 if you had written it in the first person..."I and she" is much better than "Alex and Lauren" over and over.

jenorma2012jenorma2012about 7 years ago
not bad

I guess there is more than one way to cheer someone up

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