All Comments on 'The Naked Envoy'

I doubt that even Allithrians could transmute paper and ink into gems as well as you. Thanks!

so I've given this *5 as I really liked it. Is there anything else an anonymous user can do to help this great story prosper in the contest?

A wonderful and light story. Loved it. The people of light ring a bell for some reason. ;)

Love your work sir and as always am eager to read more.

Thoroughly enjoyable story. I loved the characters especially Magdalena, she is charming to a fault. Nice job.

Positive Reviews with Thoughtful Comments . . .

. . . are always welcomed by authors and can influence readers’ choices. BurntRedstone’s name attached to a story is a promise of a well written story. Thank you, BR, you’ve done it again! I love your work.

A delightfully humourous fantasy tale. The joy implicit in those coming in contact with Magdalena is inspiring. 5*

This story would make a really cool movie.

Another marvellous story with extremely fascinating characters. BR does it again! 5 stars all the way!

As always a very entertaining story.

I have to say I love the message within the story and fully support it, but that's where for me it ends, have to say in my opinion this Isn't one of your better stories and I love your other Sci-Fi stories, I have read many of them several times.

Can't wait for the continuation of some of those other series!

Another example of why you are the MASTER!!! More please!!!

A great message contained in a light story. Not the best of the BurntRedstone offerings, as that bar is very high, but a good entry to the Nude Day contest. An enjoyable read.

An excellent feel good story. Dare I say it is solid gold? Thank you.

Not my favourite of your stories but a enjoyable read. Half way through my thoughts started to see Michael in Stranger in a Strange Land and how Maggie was really grokking what was really important. Not bad if Heinlein is my first thoughts.

Excellent story. Incredibly sexy, without being explicit at all! A little bit May-Sue/Pollyanna. I’m sorry Shelsine wasn’t redeemed. I guess someone had to be a source of conflict. Maybe the redemption of Shelaine could be the plot of the sequel.

An interesting well written story again from Burnt. Loved the 8dea of Magdalena spreading confidence and happiness through her office before her true purpose was revealed. Look forward to your next.

Superb imagination with a frivolous plot. I enjoyed this feel-good bit of fluff on a quiet Sunday morning. Thanks Burnt.

Keep 'em comin'.

Willowghby said it perfectly… Fun Fastasy! So well written and very much enjoyable. A good read just before bed. Pleasant dreams for me. Thank-you

Again another well done story but rather short for you. This one is truly a short story, but still well written. We are all waiting for your next one. I have caught up and have read all of yours that are posted so please don't keep us waiting long.

Anony Mous

All you need is love... And transmutation

What else can I say but "Burnt Redstone is by far the best Author here at Literotica", and there isn't but one close second and that would be SaddleTramp1956's. Another 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS and a big THANKS.

That was a lot of fun!!!

An ideal utopian fantasy. Unfortunately benevolent progenitors of the past have been killed by their own people or dominant power structures to keep business as usual. Gandhi, buddha, Zoroaster, Jesus have been killed and their enlightened gift subverted.

When will "Peace on Earth, goodwill to mankind " ever become a reality? It would the controlling and manipulative military industrial complex out of business, and empathize enlightened health, education and welfare for the greater good...

it was kinda fun, but not very interesting except as something different, a sort of palate cleanser. that said, i do hope friendly aliens start mind melting certain denizens of earth with less negative feelings for the grrater good....itd be nice.