All Comments on 'The Naked Planet'

Your story has more in common with sci-fi of the 1950's and early 1960's than most other ones here, even though it's more explicit than those 60 years ago.

Not the Plan 9 from Outer Space kind of sci-fi, but the classic stories by Heinlein, Dick, Simak and others. There's always a subtext that you can translate easily to the current day on Earth.

A story that is truly refreshing to read. Like most of your other stories, in fact. *****

Thanks for sharing.

I'm happy to have found another accomplished author here on lit. Thanks for your contribution, I'm looking forward to reading your other stories, new and old!

I wish I could get my Log In to work but I have to post as Anonymous for now. I normally don't read entries in the Sci-Fi area, but am VERY glad I did; this was GREAT! My member name is SeaBassKit, and I can assure you I will watch for future submissions with interest. Very well written and well-spun tale. I thank you.

Watching the 1960s version of The Time Machine followed by Planet of the Apes.

Not a fan of Sci Fi but loved this. Beautifully written. Sexy from the first page. Loved how you fully embraced and developed the theme. Good luck!

You don't really expect to read actually good hard sci-fi on literotica, but this one just made my day.

Great story line. Enjoyed it immensely.

I really liked it and I think ill go ahead and read some of your other works

A great homage, derivative, but purposely so, lovingly so, like an inside joke between friends, nudge-nudge, wink-wink.

I grew up reading old sci-fi tales. I loved them, but I always found myself skipping forward to the good parts, the weird aliens, the laser fights, whirling machines and strange happenings. This story fixes that issue with lots of hot, dirty sex and sexual tension.

So many of those old stories beg for the porn treatment, and you've given them just that--a sweet, smutty make-over, touching up all the right spots as only an artist that is intimately familiar with something can do.

A great take on the Nude Day theme. Something to be proud of.

Who hasn't imagined themselves a space captain landing on a planet of beautiful, naked women?

nice story! great... well written...

The way you write your endings are so perfect, so amazing, that a sequel is impossible, but the stories are so amazing we demand one! It just breaks my heart! And I hate you but love you for it!

You're a fabulous writer. That's three of your stories I've read today. Really loved this one. Pictured it perfectly.

It's Very, Very Interesting the way Future Life turn's out in a way that's hard to believe. NOT all Mankind is eval.

entertaining, imaginative, fast moving narrative, with more than a bit of truth. enjoy your creativity ...

i wish it would have been me there instead of caleb~!

Love this story, be cool if was continued

Love this story

there was really intresting story and quite sexy i just wish them was more and was a ulmate super sexy orgy at the end with him accepting what he did and now being the guradian of the daughters i mean one Adam and a hunder Eves i do anything to see a squeal with him just having ulmate sex impregating all of them

Really nice!

The author of this tale made the main character a complete buffoon and all men murderers. Not an enjoyable or realistic tale.