All Comments on 'The Naked Weapon Pt. 02'

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I must say this story is most enjoyable. The main character is a lot of fun. His inner monologues crack me up. You manage to give the story plenty of room to grow while while not drowning it out with mindless sex just to fill plot holes. Ofcourse the sex scenes when there have been great. Keep fininding that balance of eroticism, great story, and humor. You have a new fan!

I dislike how short the chapters are and there were several instances of missing words. Do you have an editor?

All the stories I write for free lack an editor, as it's just me. They're basically first drafts, used as a way to entertain and gain fans who I hope will then buy my money-charge stories, or become Patreons for. All the stories I charge money for either have a professional editor (Purgatory Wars and Worldshard) or I at least have friends read through them (my Disunited Front books.)

As for chapter length, I can only write so much per week. Remember, I'm working on multiple simultaneous projects: my free work, my work published on Amazon, and by day job!

Now, I was bitten by a radioactive Harlan Ellison in my youth, but even my writing speed cannot be pushed THAT far. :)

I have to say I enjoy your writing style. I am going to have to look up your other work on Patreon... thanks for a great read...

I started this series expecting another generic SF story. I am so glad I was wrong. From the obscure pop culture references (The Legend of Zelda quote was perfectly timed), to the humorous introspection, to the well done character development, this is a gem of a story on Lit. Well done. There are a few grammar glitches, missing/repeated words mainly, but they are rare enough not to take away from the tale. I am really enjoying your creativity.

Thanks! The Naked Weapon was one of my popular stories, and I'm glad to see people are still enjoying it! ^_^

I've just started reading your series and I'm enjoying it very much. I like the premise, the unique antagonists, and the characters. I'm also getting most of the references and am able to easily dismiss the rare grammar and/or editorial misque. Can't wait to see where the story goes. 5/5*