All Comments on 'The Name of the Game'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
everybody seems to be whispering.....

I really liked it except for the fact that there seems to be an inordinate amount of whispering going on. On just this page, they whispered four times and spoke softly at least four times. Then add in all the whispers and spoke softly on the other pages. That's a lot!

SweetMajSweetMajover 12 years ago
HOT and WELL WRITTEN

Normally I'm not into group but this story is HOT!!!

I love your words "Roll your happy ass over here!" :)

Very well written, Tx!

Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
A Real Winner

One of your best, Tx! Couldn't have enjoyed it more, except if I was Robert!

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