All Comments on 'The Neighborhood Ch. 05'

by vanpeebles

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txcoatl1970txcoatl1970over 11 years ago

I'm not usually into the swinging bit- but the scene between Jennifer and Chris was hot! IMO just Emily and Jennifer should be enough playmates for Chris, but it's your story to do your way. Him getting it on with the Giamattis next door and whomever else just seems to be over the top. Writing swinging so it seems special with each playmate is difficult but you've done an xxxcellent job of it so far!.

PaulScottBarbarasSonPaulScottBarbarasSonover 11 years ago
Leave It To Mom's Beaver!

This series is coming along fine as good old school incestuous swinging in the otherwise respectable middle class neighborhood, as in the smutty adult paperbacks I so enjoyed in my mispent youth.

ansdguyansdguyover 11 years ago
Wow

I can't wait for more chapters. This story very well developed and written.

goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
very hot story

5 stars. wow - great sex

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