by AuthorApril
This was very good. I can't wait for Chapter 3! Love the detailed writing.
Quite an interesting tale you have going here. Can't wait for Ch. 3. Still hard from Ch. 1.
Your no rush approach here is a gifted technique. Some writers have it others do not. You have a talent for erotic story twelling which has me looking forward to more.
Looking forward to seeing how the characters progress. Very hot and sexy.