All Comments on 'The Neighbors' Pet Slut Ch. 01'

Solid as always. I'd offer that is was a little heavy with adjectives and narrative summary. But that is just one guy's opinion. Super hot though and I'll continue to read.

I'm not sure if you intended Mrs. Reynolds' behavior to be a sort of seduction. It came across as call the cops and change the locks creepy. Who would care to impress this bitch? Who would let politeness extend to everything the bitch says and does in the house? Submissive is one thing, stupid doormat is a different, and not sexy, thing.

Not certain who goes to an erotic website for the purposes of literary criticism, that's freaking ridiculous imho. (Yes, you, anonymous comment #1). The story is hot and well written. All we can ask for in free erotic fantasy.