All Comments on 'The New Adventure Ch. 01'

Well written and edited. Can't wait for more.

really good! can't wait for the next chapter

Both of your main characters are really well-written and their chemistry is amazingly hot. I think this has the potential to be one of the best series on this site, I hope you post many more chapters. Thanks!

I, like the others, am looking forward to the next chapter. I'm sure all of us guys (at least I know I do) wish they'd had a hot 40 something to teach us how to be better lovers when we were in our late teens/early 20's.

Great character & story development - not rushed at all. Keep the good work coming.

Excellent read and well written,can't wait to read the next episode.

Wow what an excellent story

5 starred and added in my fav

a small suggestion.. can the dialogue between them bit short?

I hope I am not sounding critical.

Thanks a ton for this lovely story

waiting eagerly for the next chapter/s

Neo

Just want to reinforce what everyone else is saying about this story. GREAT!

Is there going to be a chapter 2?

Never be sorry to have a bit of plot and character development in an erotic story. It makes things more real, and the sex all the hotter as a result. This is very well done. Happily anticipating further installments. Thank you.