by iraussieguy
Couldn't give your story 100 but I really liked the way you've set the scene. Great to have a homegrown Melbourne story on this site that doesn't pretend to replicate a US experience. Looking forward to the next installment, picking up the heat and eroticism in one of the sweetest settings on mother earth.
Oh My God what a great story. I wish I could have voted 1000 for you. You are one great writer. You for sure have to do a part two. Please keep up the great work. I look forward to more of your stories.
Youv'e done it again! Can't wait for the next part of this one!!! Keep 'Em Cuming!
Melody
Great characters, great plot, fucking great sex scenes dude. 5 all the way I reckon.
All I can do is at to the "Wow"s that have already been said really, lol. Wonderful stuff, very arousing and unique story....thanks!