by Justrex
I read it twice then couldn't find it. Where did it go? So glad it is back!
I was blown away in all senses of the phrase. Great story, great writing. Loved it to pieces.
This story is very familiar. I forget where I read it first. Glad I found it and you finished it. Amazing job
It has been nice to see your work finding its way back. It is all truly erotica in so many ways that the majority of written work isn't. Every time I read one of your stories, I marvel at your ability to convey training as a process; a positive, caring one at that. Your characters are always people I would enjoy spending time with
[ ;) ] or at least joining for drinks and a nice conversation. I hope readers here are appreciating this one more than the bdsm crowd. (And shame on them for letting the gay element keep them from seeing what ought to be a Hall of Fame story of submission.)
Now that I have time to be back, I get to enjoy working my way through your works again.
FA_JF
I found I could not stop going back and reading yet more. It was one of the best short stories I've come across. You've a definite way with words!
I found myself longing to become the guys slave, to submit my body to him for his pleasure, to be consumed by lust. Thanks for the great fantasy!
How is this not in the top list?!?!? Ridiculously sexy. Looooooooved it!
FBG
You are insanely talented! Jesus fucking Christ this story turned me on ridiculously.
My goodness....from the first page till the last word...my pants is insanely tight and starts hurting me, seriously, the story was very well written...why isn't this story the top 1?
Holy smokes, I'm so happy to have stumbled over this story! Such a great piece of work, it makes me sad having reached the end.
What a great way to train a boy and make him NEED what his master wants. What a hot boy who's found his role in life and longs for more. I was rock-hard through most of that and shot twice. Thank you for writing this and for the attention to detail, even if you repeated the final section!
(But Latin should be: "Omnibus in moribus, omnibus in rebus, ego sum Suus." I hope the tattoo hasn't gone on yet.)
What is so great about this story is the honest insecurity of the master as he fights his lust. Every master in this type of story is perfect. Not so in this story. And it makes it feel more real and more intense. Descriptions of the 2 main characters in the story would be an improvement…. But the lack of description makes us imagine what they look like in our heads. (A refreshing change). By far the best story of its type on this sight. Because the 2 main characters are so wrapt up in each other, the master so caring and the sub so willing just makes it better. Know one is forced, know one does anything against their wishes. It’s such a refreshing change to read this type of story. Loved everything in this story although this story was written in 2015 I would like to thank the author. Thankyou so much.
Ugh. I can practically feel you, standing close behind me, your breath hot in my ear as that deep, gravely voice whispers "pet boy." And it sends shivers down my back...
Great work! I am much looking forward to reading the rest of your publications.