All Comments on 'The New Car Ch. 04'

excellent can continue with aditis friends or orgies with her younger sister

You write too good

Wow no words to explain, you are such an awesome writer. Pls don't stop this and continue her adventures with her 50-55 year old construction worker next time, make her to wore an sleeveless blouse with transparent saree that time please please please.

This series must go on!

Like the saree idea. Also group sex with construction workers or mechanics

I am really impressed by your language skills and the down to earth characterization. The transition of Aditi from a housewife to a slut has been done in a very convincing fashion. May be she would now move away from the mechanics and find some interesting and totally different lover! Keep going!

This is really super man, As said by some one make her to wear sexy sarees on next occasion and got fucked by her workers.

It's a copy of one of Urbansluts stories !! You poor thing ! We Indians are already known as best copy cats in the world. Don't immortalize that bad opinion !! Go Get some life

What a beautiful story !!!!!it does resemble urbanslut's story when it rains it pours a little bit but this has got way better characterization than what it had and not as much the douche bag who fucking calls all Indians copy cats does

The story is very well written and extremely erotic. Looking forward to more of the same!

Plz add next story in this series.

Let aditi get fucked by someone also while her husband watching

pls continue the series

This cant be the end. There was a reason you got her to this level. Her married life must have had some impact as an outcome of this sexual awakening. how does it affect her husband when he finds out? Does he accept it or does he leave? Please take it to its closure.

please write some supplementary stories with just plain debauchery...cant have enough of the animalistic chemistry between aditi and gurnam

pls add the next chapter

this is getting interesting pls come up with the next part

I must compliment you on your writing skills you are amazing ... Please continue with this series ... the characters have taken up life of their own ... you need to continue with them it has been too long a wait we deserve a chapter no 5

Next chapter plz

Please write next story plz

Next part plz

I know you probably wont pay heed. But this story needs air to breathe. It probably needs more exploring than any of your other stories (even considering the politician story, which in a way is just some group-sex / romantic angles). This story has the thrill of taboo, intrigue of naughtiness and the mystique of the unknown. Hope you will come back to this sometime.

It would be nice with some more adventurous as in ch.4

Wow, this is an awesome story! Can we have another chapter or a sequel?

Great ! Write more & continue !

The story is amazing. It is one of the best stories I've ever read online. I know it's hard for u to get the storyline and all the stuff but u have done a fantastic job. Please consider my request and i hope u will continue the story.

I rarely post about such stories but this was amazing. It may be difficult, but could you please make a sequel? You're such a talented writer, I'm sure this will be a success.

Please waiting for another part

Great Story

Waiting for next part

Waiting for next part

Please continue

Please write the next chapter of this. Amazing work this is!

This is the best erotica i have ever read.Thankyou bdrew for this series and all the others too.I really hope someday you will decide to continue this it is just to good to end

Some possible scenarios which i would like to contribute which may help you

1) Aditi could hire shanti as her maid and gurnam is already a regular visitor you could throw pappu at the mix at times when hubby is out of town or such

2)Aditi could be caught by one of her innocent friend and aditi could slowly transition her into a slut

3)Inlaws may visit and now gurnam and aditi have to be discreet

4)Some exhibitionism might be engineered since face masks are common this days

Ps-This are just ideas i am not a writer..i would feel myself very lucky if i could in any way.Thankyou😁

This series is perhaps one of the best I have read on literotica. Great repeat value and I love how you both describe the sex in vivid detail and jump right to the action (like your last paragraph in Chapter 4). I'm a fan!

yet another crappy story that just wants to describe the sex. These stupid stories are so baseless and so far from reality

Great story

It's awesome i really felt like Aditi.

BEEEEAUTIFUL.

I guess I have a lot to learn as a novice to come up to a decent level in writing erotica.

Thanks for the effort.