by WillingWolf
Why did we have to plod through all that drivel about a church roof and their fund raising scheme? It reads like both couples want to swap, so why not get on with fucking each other, and their marriages? And this drivel is going to have more chapters? Why? Oh, so you can describe the fucking, in detail. Why wait? Its not like there is any drama here, or a plot that needs to be resolved, or some story that is worth reading. Let's just get naked and fuck, like all the married couples do in merry old England. Kind of underwhelming.