All Comments on 'The New Neighbors'

"Kate and Patti were laying on the living room floor"

What were they laying. Eggs? Carpets?

The word is "lying".

"they laid there for a few"

Enough to make an omelet, at this rate.

Please learn the difference between lie, lay, laid and layed. You get it wrong every time except one.

You capture swinging and its inherent eroticism well... keep going! More please. Five.

So sorry for making a few mistakes, even with these mistakes people seem to like what I write. But thanks for the comment anyway. You didn't have to be so sarcastic.

This is a good story and erotic, thank you.

I often comment upon the use of laying instead of lying and laid instead of lay.

I don't know why so many contributors to this site don't know instinctively which word to properly use.

I am usually very careful when I check my spelling and this is just a word I seem to have trouble of which one to use. It was an honest mistake. I'll be more careful in the future. But I am glad you liked it.

Beautiful story! Please write a sequel or new story with the same or other three pairs!